Sunday, 20 December 2009

In my life

There are many things gets us in our life. This things sometimes come good or bad. But this things that happen in our life we can’t forget it. Now I will write thing happen to me in this year. We all know streets in Abu Dhabi are very crowded and in one day must get accident. In the month of Ramadan my uncle and me got an accident on our way to the university. As my uncle was driving his car and suddenly the car in front stopped and my uncle did not careful. Than our car and The car in front were crash together. But in this accident there were not any injuries or wounds because the accident were not strong. In this accident we learn should the driver drive his car carefully.
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  1. Chris22 December 2009 at 07:54

    80% - 2 errors in spelling and capital letters

    1 & 2 Than our car and The car in front - the first word is spelled with an "e", so you have "then." You also have an incorrect capital letter in the middle of the sentence.

    This is an interesting story. I'm glad that you and your uncle were not hurt.

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